Congrats To My Boy For A Winning Essay On Diabetes
I opened the city's monthly newspaper last night to discover that my eight-year-old son had won their literary award for children's non-fiction. (I had forgotten working on it with him, which makes for a great surprise.) The judge praised his sense of humor and personal anecdotes. That's my boy. Here's the essay.
I Have Diabetes
by Theo, age 8
One
day, I had to go to the doctor because I was drinking and peeing a lot. That
may sound weird. But it meant I probably had diabetes. And I do. Diabetes means
I have to get shots for the rest of my life, because my pancreas isn’t making
enough insulin.
You’re probably wondering:
1. How did you get diabetes?
2. Can it stop?
3. Are you still normal? (Of
course)
Answer 1. No one knows.
Answer 2. No.
Answer 3. I am the person typing
here.
My
routine of the day is like yours but when I wake up, before eating breakfast I
check my blood sugar. That means I have to wash my hands and prick my finger
with a black tube that has a tiny needle in it.
Then
I press down on the black tube and the needle pricks me. It does not hurt. Then
I squeeze my finger and some blood pops out. Next, I pop open a bottle and pull
out a tiny piece of paper. I put the paper in a device shaped like a square.
Then I put the drop of blood in the tiny piece of paper and some numbers pop
up. If the numbers are really high, I get extra insulin in my shot. If the
numbers are really low, I get some food and I have to wait 15 minutes before my
shot.
I
get at least four shots every day. I prick my fingers more often than that.
The
first few days I had diabetes, I cried whenever I got a shot because the shot
was very scary and frightening, and I wasn’t used to it. The third day, my mom
said it hurt her feelings when I cried and ran away from shots. She asked me to
be brave, and I did.
My
dad didn’t know this. He was at work. My mom and I wanted to play a trick. I
was in the bathroom hiding (as usual), and my mom was pretending to beg me to
get a shot. And I was pretending to cry. Dad came home from work and he heard
us pretending. We opened the door and said, Surprise! My dad was so surprised
that I wasn’t really crying and that I was taking the shots without crying.
Ever since that day, I don’t cry or run away when I get a shot. Sometimes a
shot goes in and hurts and I cry, but otherwise, it’s okay.
A
good part about diabetes is I get food in gym class because it’s exercise and
that would make my blood sugar low. Another good part is I get special
attention every day. But sometimes I don’t like diabetes. Sometimes I have to
miss recess or I don’t get to eat when other people do. Once, I had to be in
the school office for thirty minutes, and I missed eating lunch with my friends
and art class. I have to deal with this every day, unlike my friends.
I
have to be brave.
your son sure knows how to end with a bang, much like you!
ReplyDeletewhat a fantastic poem, so clear and clever. this would make a great video or short booklet to give to newly diagnosed kids i think.
my fave part is "i am the person typing here" b/c it reminds me of something my daughter would say.
well done, theo!
I am so proud!
ReplyDeleteTheo is awesome!
ReplyDeleteOutstanding; what a powerful story. I know you're proud! Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteTheo has lured me out of lurkdom. This is stellar. Congratulations to him!
ReplyDeleteTheo, congratulations! You really give us a clear picture of what it's like to have diabetes, and you do it in a way that makes us feel as if we know you. Wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteThis is Theo and I think I'm awesome and you are too!
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